Derpy Age (Comic) 2/3

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: You're seeing it.
Part 3: [link]

So this is still a more or less direct translation from that scene in Ice Age.
Still using this background [link] by
Let me know what you think.
(Don't be afraid to be harsh, this is my first time actually drawing comics so I'm still learning. Fire away )

Software: Inkscape and a little of GIMP (to handle some issues I had with the rendering grrr I don't know what went wrong.)
Time: Like 10 hours... again.